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~I like it like that yah windows down chilling with the radio on
I like it that dayum sun so hot make the girls take it all off~

"Alfie" you screamed towards you best friend

"hey dude guess what were doing today" he screams right back

"what?" you say giggling and butting you lip.

"we're going to a dance beach party!" he says bouncing up and down

"k then let's take my convertible!" you say exitedly

you couldn't wait to spend time with Alfred because what he didn't know us that you had fallen helplessly in love with him.
The drive along the way wasnt to long you acually were driving next to your friend Auther Kirkland in his convertible buggy. Today was the hottest day of the year and you realized that you hadn't brought a bathing suit.  Whatever you thought to yourself how bad could it be.  

Once you got there finally, Iggy, Feli, Ludwig, Lizzy, Sey, and Natie were there

All the guys had taken off there shirts so you thought what the hell
And took off your top and bottoms and went into the water and right before you dove in you notice Alfred with his mouth drop

~whistle as the girls walk by
If the cops roll up pour the cops a cup cuz everyone here tonight!~

When you were drying off you saw the bad touch trio walking by and as they do they whilst

"hey___ ,you wanna come with us chica" Tony whispers to you

Alfred stood in front of you growling, they walked away a little faster

"_____, what am I going to do with you" he asks innocently

"WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT ME IM NOT THE ONE WHO GR......" before you could finish you feel a pair of lips on yours

He brake ps the kiss and whispers in you ear

"I love everything about you and I can't help but get mad when someone's going to ruin the best day of my life, and by the way cute bra"
He says rapping his arms around your waist and pulls you In for another kiss.
Here you go
Don't hate it's my first one
Open for requests

You belong to you...and Alfred
Alfred belongs to the creAtor of Hetalia
I like it like thAt : hot chelle ray
So have fun!!!!
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Gemiri Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"k then let's take my convertible!" you say exitedly 

But I wanted to take my Ford Focus... xD
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XxPeachyxMisaxX Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:yayamericaplz:
He is to cute!
:yayitalyplz: What about me ve~?
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TheGhostNeverDies Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
My bras aren't cute! don't lie alfie... or russia will visit you, da?
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moushi-senpai Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
:iconthumbsupplz: great job!
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xXNoraMarieXx Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's very good for your first try, though I feel you should work a bit on grammar (separations, mainly), and detail.
But other than that, this is really good!

Also, happy to see I belong to me instead of Prussia for once (and I don't read Prussiaxreader's as often as I do Americaxreader's)
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xXNoraMarieXx Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's very good for your first try, though I feel you should work a bit on grammar (separations, mainly), and detail.
But other than that, this is really good!
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ERbear26 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconmhhmplz: *shrk* ...Iggy has a convertible Buggy... cute story
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monkchoo24 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Aw...
Very nice job!
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MrsRomanoVargas Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks it's my first one so it was a lot of fun to wright
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